If I were to wrap my hands around your heart
I would anticipate each beat
feel it’s melody play out softly
piano keys ‘neath my nimble fingers
If I were to read the etchings on your face
trace the story lines behind your tired eyes
silent words would dance before me
shadow puppets reflected on a white wall
If I were to cradle your moon soaked tears
as you wept a waterfall on my shoulder
I would understand why they cannot dry
without the breeze of whispered comforts
For my gift to you is Einfühlung
contained within a ribbon tied box
small enough to fit in your pocket
but not so big you’d get lost inside
So when those weary moments
leave you choking on the cherry stones
the sweetness of their flesh turned sour
let me see inside your soul and love you anyway
Written in response to Kellie Elmore’s Free Write Friday prompt ‘Empathy’. For this piece, I chose the German word ‘Einfühlung’ which translates into English as ‘feeling into’. For more information please click on the link Einfühlung/Empathy

brilliant!
Thanks Len, lovely to see you back here x
oh. my. god. “let me see inside your soul and love you anyway” you just gave me goosebumps! I LOVE THAT! I cannot even express to you just how beautifully written I think this is. I was captivated by every line. Wonderful job, Vanessa and thank you for posting it to FWF!
Thank you Kellie, really kind of you to say so. It’s all down to a great prompt xx
This is lovely. We should all love just like that.
Lovely piece
Nick
Beautiful! I loved it.
This is awesome, Vanessa! Your words seem to caress and comfort, flowing beautifully. Really nice!
My favorite part – let me see inside your soul and love you anyway. How simply beautiful, Vanessa. ~ Love, Bobbie